poorjoe

I almost vomited. Dumb character development, bad writing, simply horrendous plot. I'm sorry I read this piece of bullshit. Later I went back to homepage to read that the author was writing just for patre..on. I amost feel sorry for his paying readers. Dont read it, or read it and then wash your eyes with some holy water.

Have you abandoned your avatar fanfiction??????????????? Please tell! I even went to you patreo but couldn't find it!! Kindly reply!! Thanksssss

Hey there author-san! Have you abandoned this story???

I don't know why but I'm almost vomiting due to this cringe factor.

Has this book been abandoned?!

cringe

Anyways I'm entitled to display my own opinion, Webnovel would have blocked me if I said something extremely degrading. But all I said is completely okay, the author might get angry reading this and I want him to, just so he can feel my anger while I was reading this cringe. Nobody asked you to be a noisy nosy aunt here. Now go fetch that stick! Good doggy.

Can anyone recommend quality fanfics like this one???? Legit wanna speed read one :(

Why do you not use grammarly? Your grammar is really bad, especially in you first few chapters. Please just use grammerly, its free! Also, try to get an editor, use discord to create a community if you have to but please get an editor. Your novel is good but the grammar is making it unbearable to read. I legit want to drop it but only the good reviews of the plot keep me going.

bro just use the fking grammarly!