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If you see this, 5 likes and I'll update this thing.

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

masculine, due to translator errors it can say "she" but it is masculine

understandable, but he was not made to understand the na'vi culture, he was made to be the perfect being in survival on earth and in pandora. I know that Dr. Grace taught him the Na'vi culture to the point of mastering it, at least theoretically, but for him it is nothing more than information about a culture.

Understandable, but despite the fact that it would have been a real problem if an artery or a vein was severely damaged or any other part necessary for the body in a survival environment, that is precisely what this series of tests of himself was used to be able to see his abilities or limits that his body really had and if for some reason it was damaged it would regenerate (call it the plot buff). The scientists taught him some survival and more dr.grace on the planet of pandora and from what he has seen nothing is truly a problem for his integrity, but in reality he did not know anything about his abilities other than that he was stronger, faster , smarter, more resistant but he didn't know until he limited and that intrigued him.

Understandable, the character is stupid for you, any suggestions to improve it, just clarify I'm new to writing and I don't have the slightest idea how to write a story, that's why I'm doing it. What I can see you dislike is why he killed something in front of a Na'vi, it's understandable that you think that because the Na'vi have a highly spiritualistic culture regarding nature and their distaste for unnecessary hunting by at least in the culture of the ometecaya. But what I tried at least was to demonstrate his abilities and that if he attacked him he would at least defend himself, apart from Dr. Grace he knows his culture but he doesn't care because before him they are nothing more than strangers with a spiritual culture.

understandable, the character is stupid, any suggestions to improve it, just clarify I'm new to this writing and well I have no idea how to write a story that's why I'm doing it. What I can see that you don't like is the reason why they tried to break the bones in a survival situation, but the idea that I tried to capture was that I was trying to understand his body to see how resistant it was and anyway one of his many abilities are super regeneration and he knew it (I think that ability did not explain it much)

Es una historia con una calidad de escritura muy incoherente y mucho más porque usa el Google traductor, casi no actualiza, su desarrollo de la historia deja mucho a que desear, su personaje principal lo hizo muy dominado rápidamente por lo que casi no hay desarrollo de personaje y en cuanto al contexto general por lo menos sabe algo del lore de avatar