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This book is truly a gem! It shows a more realistic side to our main character. Although he is smart, he has his moments where he'll need someone else's reminder or input. In the comment section of certain chapters, I saw people complaining about how the main character became stupid. In my opinion, it just shows that he isn't omnipotent and has plenty of room to develop. Another thing I enjoy about this book, is how the translator interacts with us readers. Explaining certain things such as how Webnovel's system works and how they may not have full control over the novel. I really hope this story gets picked, I genuinely like it. I am sorry if my words are a little confusing, I am not the best at articulating my words.
Bahaha, agreed.
Some of my friends haven't read a single fantasy book, nor sci-fi...
If you read the mtl version of this story, or rather just directly translate the original Chinese text of this book. You will find that the direct translation is 'Fairy' and not 'Immortal'.
I think what he meant was that the points given from the spirit medicine is insufficient. Which would definitely make sense, since the amount of energy needed to level up continues to increase by almost two-fold everytime.
I believe this story would have been better if the grammar and tenses were fixed. It feels like the story was written by a 10 year old. If it was...well, I guess I can't say much. Story development is excellent, I enjoyed it very much. Again, only problem is the grammar and tenses. Out of all, good job.
My mother does.
I really like this book. However, I found many incorrect uses of certain vocabularies and the addition of some unnecessary words. I think you need to re-read your book and check to see if all your sentences make sense. You should also include more punctuation like commas. Anyway, keep up the good work. I look forward to your next update.
That man had Song Daehwa as his liability. (Correction) Please don't be offended. I shall be going through your book and pointing out your errors.
He will probably end up gaining a 5 elements spirit physique. Or atleast smth similar
It was your own choice was it not???
One of the best trial reads I have seen so far. It is very similar to another book called 'Digging To Survive', however, I find this book far more interesting and exciting. I like how the story progresses not too fast or slow and how the main character isn't too much of a lazy bum. I recommend reading this. It is quite light hearted, a very enjoyable read. Hopefully it gets picked for a continuation in translations. It would be such a pity if it isn't picked.
I think it's '80 Years of signing in at the cold palace I am invincible'