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Tbh, I would love it and highly appreciate it if you guys could rate this book. 😳😘😊

OMYGOD, Okay, Author here. Please take your time to read, cause I'll be giving some honest review here. THIS BOOK IS MY FIRST NOVEL, so take note and don't expect it to be grand, but for me it is worth the read, actually I'll just advice you to read Chapters 27 and above. Okay, first the writing quality. When I first wrote this book, I was feeling so good like a pro, but honestly as I let others read it and edit it out imma give it an average of 3, cause as time passed by I get to realize there were a lot of mistakes. Story Development, Okay, I'm not gonna deny it. This was the Most challenging part. This story has A LOT of loopholes that I myself got confused as I edited the story over and over. I really tried to limit myself cause at that time, my ideas were spurting. This story is written to be a mystery, and well it is mysterious af cause even the author got herself confused! BUT hey, I would totally still advice you dear reader to give it a go (if you like confusing fcks like ur excrush, jwk). So I'm giving this one a 4. Next is Character Design, well I ****ed up in this one. Not gonna deny it, It's the main leads, yep. And I'm more pissed off with Ophelia than Icarus, seriously, She was supposed to be the strong FMC but she dissapoints me, oops sorry, I dissapointed her. But I just really went with the flow of her confused character cause she clueless af, and yep it was meant to be that way (oh yea I did it because of the twists) Imma give it a 3. Updating stability? -5 Phh, Im done with this book, its friggin completed but bruh, could have done better, But imma praise myself as "not bad for a first" But "totally not good (for me)." AND lastly, world Background, Uhm its def not confusing as the whole plot itself, Just the marcia mansion and the 4 Regions of a Single continent with some magical history (which makes up the story's confusing flow) -a 4. So basically, this is an average book but the twists of this story are worth the read and exploration. Or maybe it's just? What can I say though, I'm just a writer. And if I may, I would love to recommend my second book the Greatest Scandal of the Century. This book has class and well, I enjoyed writing it more. If you may, visit the description and read the first chapter, then maybe you might end up reading more of it. Thank you for reading this so much. Really, appreciate your time to read this. Please enjoy your reading and explore more creative books😊

So, what I'm saying is that, I hope you as a reader would enjoy your time reading this and take a moment to let your thoughts be heard. I would really be happy when I get to know that something I worked for is being looked forward to and being enjoyed (not that I deserve it for being lazy). But I really enjoyed writing these pieces together, so I hope it's not just me ☺😊

Author here! Please take your time reading this, I'll be giving an honest review for my work. Okay, as for the writing, forgive me for the grammar and tiny errors, and I'm still improving my writing style (So, I would give this a 4). As for the story development, the plot, and World Background - I've properly laid them out quiet well, as each chapters reveal their lives and struggles that molds and makes out the Main Characters (imma give it a 5) So far in the prologue, it is revealed that this world is divided into 4 regions namely the North, South, East and West Empire. Well, we get some a bit of fantasy/magic involvement here, but I've been trying to portray it as a post-magic world, wherein magic is banned in some areas. And one more Note to take is that, some of you might have read my first book and thought this was a sequel. Well, somewhat it is, But I'm telling you IT'S NOT. And there is no need to read MSE (my first book which is really written in chaos). AND lastly, imma warn you that IM A LAZY WRITER. I have a life to live, I love to work on Damen as well, as much as I would love to improve my writing capabilities and word play. But forgive me if I can't update steadily, I am not a contracted Author (hopefully in the future), but these stories that am writing and the upcoming ones are like a creative momento that I would like to store and share with everyone. These stories are meant to inspire and motivate me as I look back, if ever the time comes for me to (just preparing for mid-life crisis).

Geeze, I've been thinking if this should be just the last chapter lmao. I'm such a lazy writer, no wonder. The plot for this story really had me goin' (mostly done) but writing the details takes A LOT of EFFORT. Really respect those Authors who are consistently updating their works. Huhuhu, might as well come back next year when I've finished writing most of the story. Sorry guys, but I hope you keep reading my updates and please share your thoughts or let me know how you find the story so far (little comments are a BIG motivation, no kidding).

JEZUS, I JUST LOVE THIS PART : "And Damen knew of it his glorious bones".. those GLORIOUS BONES. jeeejxksi (heck im such a weirdo)

"His hands were incredibly gripping the railings hard" - LET IT GO BABE!

😢yea, actually based Granny Marcia from my late grandma

Whoa! Really a unique style of writing, I must say, this is my first time reading this kind of fantasy genre and it was super intriguing. The way you describe the scenes are lit and yes, even the plot itself is interesting. I would recommend this book to all Fantasy lovers! Enjoy, and thank you Author!

This book is just overwhelming with emotions! The story is just relatable in many ways and I can really sympathize with Xavier with the way you depict the scenes. You did an awesome job Author! Keep on writing <3