MistressUnderworld
Will continue to write fictional stories until I find someone to firewalk with me.
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I love thriller and stories with twists that keeps me on my toe. Your story is interesting, but a little bit fast paced. And some grammatical errors here and there. Nothing crucial enough to bother me, but definitely noticeable. A little bit of improvement and proof-reading will go a long way. Best of luck!