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BorisTakerman

BorisTakerman

Lv1

Someone took the flag off the flagpole.

2020-08-07 Se unióUnited States
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    Comentado por

    Hi : )

    Ch 6 The Spirit [6]
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    respondió a BorisTakerman

    Update: It lasted 2 months after this comment was made. Im goated.

    "F*ck, I'm getting goosebumps. This person is actually gay? No way, no way, no way. There really are men who like other men?"
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    The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    respondió a SNS27

    Similar.

    She sat up in a fit and tried to open her eyes by instinct, but this time she saw a world, a new world. A world of fog and particles, though outside a certain distance it was pure blackness.
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    respondió a kokorakel

    Thanks for commenting :_)

    Ch 4 The Master [4]
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    respondió a kokorakel

    I think about trying to write for it again every so often but it probably can be considered dropped, though im glad to see a comment again.

    Ch 4 The Master [4]
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    Comentado por

    literally no one thinks cheap when they think food delivery

    Food delivery might have been developing rapidly recently, but most people would link them as 'cheap', 'unhealthy', etc.
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    Losing Money to Be a Tycoon
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    respondió a CharismaticPanda

    Then why 5 star it?

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    Hide in the Banished Palace and Level Up To A Big Boss
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    Publicado por

    Hard to read, hard to understand, requires you to edit the novel yourself just to read it, also its fan-fic about the marvel universe, I dont know why its in the novel section.

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    Into marvel as a celestial
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    respondió a Geee

    chapters 1 and 2 are edited, the only things that get deleted in edits is chapter comments if I edit the sentence.

    Ch 2 Ever-waiting [2]
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    respondió a Geee

    I just like comments 🙂

    Ch -1 Confused?
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman2yr
    Comentado por

    ight this story won't last

    "F*ck, I'm getting goosebumps. This person is actually gay? No way, no way, no way. There really are men who like other men?"
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    The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World
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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman3yr
    respondió a Dechet

    Yes, If you would like, I would suggest seeing the chapters with "#/22" the now actual story, ones that dont have that are remnants Im yet to edit.

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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman3yr
    respondió a Dechet

    Very very sorry, I will start putting warnings in my Authors Comments for new readers, but this rewrite is a complete overhaul using the same characters, its meant to be better than the original in every way. In this one we will have more time with the girl, please do wait for me to update the second chapter.

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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman3yr
    respondió a kokorakel

    I am working on a new novel because this one was made poorly, I overestimated how well I could wing it and moved the story to fast, if you just like the concept, I may rewrite it in the future as I have considered many times, but if you just like how I write and my implemtation of ideas, I am trying to work on a apocalyptic fantasy story that Ive been flushing out and planning since January.

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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman3yr
    respondió a Geee

    ?? It works, try copy and pasting instead.

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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman3yr
    respondió a Geee

    What spirit was drawing to show the class.

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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman3yr
    Comentado por

    https://ibb.co/Y8N1pH9

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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman3yr
    respondió a _En

    Its explained through context later, but as earlier mentioned, the mages in this world only access greater power through familiars, but in result also limits there other abilities, the reason he's so powerful in just two months is explained later due to spirit being to high-tier of a being and is influencing him to much.

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  • BorisTakerman
    BorisTakerman3yr
    respondió a Geee

    well, actually the title winter spirit was just decided because its my favorite season and I wanted to do a non-human MC novel, the story comes after the title for me.

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