Alexiiiii

It's still in its early stages, so it's difficult to know whether it will have a good direction or not. However, so far I found it very interesting and promising. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes, especially Long Ming's development. Despite this, it has a slow pace and without a clear objective. But as this story is still in its infancy, I have faith that the author will be able to show us what the direction of this story will be.

this chapter had more development than half the works on this site lol

The story is about a guy who has a strange capacity for immersion when reading, this allows him to supernaturally capture the content of what he is reading. One day before your birthday From 18 years old, he gets a system, which sends him to the world of a book he had read before, in the body of an extra who would die right at the beginning. Basically the story consists of him traveling through the fantasy worlds he had already read, while he needs to fulfill a mission. Obviously he gains special abilities in the course of the plot. Now that I've explained the plot of the story, let's talk about the plot. The story is a mixture of POV with a narrator kind of observer (?), Anyway, I admit that the narrative style of the story is a little different but this difference fit in a sublime way with The story proposal, exposing the protagonist's thoughts, along with the plot of the story he is in, this allows us to know what we are reading and what will happen in the story. Of course, there are times when the narrator hides certain information to keep the air of mystery, even because, let's face it, there would be no story if we knew everything that will happen. The protagonist has an interesting personality, his attitude change is clear throughout the story (especially when he finishes the first book), this is not a story where The protagonist "steals" the position of protagonist of the story, they are on separate paths and it is rare that they meet again. But don't worry, because the MC goes through great adventures so He is no less "protagonist" for that. As a "world traveler" story most of the characters don't have extreme relevance to the story on a general scale, so they're not fully in-depth, but don't get me wrong They are indeed of paramount importance to the period of history, and have a fair amount of layers as far as possible. The characters are captivating, although it is not possible to get attached to the vast majority. Although it has a reasonable amount of chapters, we are still in the "prologue", so to speak. Overall I'm curious to see what the author has to offer, but what about

like, "why did you go to that school", -I want quality higher education, so I'll be more prepared for the "adult world" - it's different from "how did you end up in that elite school?" -I kidnapped the principal's son and threatened him, that if he wants his son back he will have to put me in that school-

answer (even if it's been a year, anyway, whatever) "how" here refers to the actions that led him to that place, and not the reason why he went.

it is innocent to think that the intruder would depend on his eyesight to find the mc, especially when he came from the confines of space

the mc "master" is an arrogant sadist, so his interactions with the mc are hilarious and fun. the dialogues and the way of writing are good, and legible. if it weren't for the delay in launching, but this is not a criticism I know that it is extremely difficult to produce a work from scratch. overall I give 4.3/5 for the world build and character design, 3.9/5 for the main characters (at the moment mc isn't very interesting honestly) 4.2/5 for the power mechanics and alike (it's very interesting, but it's kind of superficial and too generic, mainly because it didn't show anything "Wow", of course it's still above the soap opera media on this site) and 3.3 / 5 for the release of chapters, I know that it's hard to produce new chapters, but that doesn't change the fact that it takes a long time to release new chapters, which spoils the immersion a little.

my theory is that the mc was brainwashed. and maybe all his memories about his humble family are designed so that he doesn't go in search of his real origin, so he should only use the watch in life and death situations, as they would discover his location.

it must be because loki presents an enmity towards the "good" gods (?), as Fenrir said the gods betrayed them so this probably happened to lycaon as well.

I know, I just hope it's not a Romeo and Juliet 2.0