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Kayle_ezel

Kayle_ezel

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2020-08-02 Se unióGlobal
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  • Kayle_ezel
    Kayle_ezel15 days ago
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    all I can think I'd Han yoojin and sung hyungjae

  • Kayle_ezel
    Kayle_ezela year ago
    respondió a UndeadLove

    It is back in the dorm room while he is at the school, I just don't mention it cause it is literally sat on a shelf and nothing more.

  • Kayle_ezel
    Kayle_ezela year ago
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    This is not really interesting and I can't continue as the MC is just too annoying and ML is so stereotypical. Really a bunch of clichés and not really good story building or characters.

  • Kayle_ezel
    Kayle_ezela year ago
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    I like it and appreciate it isn't cliché guideverse as well as the fact your main character is a high standing person who it would make sense to be favored and have random good things happen instead of like random person A gets a chance at a position they normally can't get.

  • Kayle_ezel
    Kayle_ezela year ago
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    I read the whole thing on another site before you contracted I believe so I think you may need to check if they took it down or not but I like it and loved the fact that it isn't just happy ever after but realistic on the fact just one person going to the past can only do so much even if they find a cure it needs time to be spread and deaths will continue for a long time still due to instability and other threats. The world has completely changed and even a cure can't undo that.

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    Kayle_ezela year ago
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    I only read the non pay part but it was nice and I liked the plot and hints at trouble to come from the beginning along with the MC and ML. I hope you keep this up through the rest and it seems so from the other reviews.

  • Kayle_ezel
    Kayle_ezela year ago
    respondió a TrishWalker

    He is because you are better then the two stars he gave to another book so he must like something of yours over there's.

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    Kayle_ezela year ago
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    It is so far beautiful work and very unique even though it is a transmigration I like this aspect of have to do a job so was transmigrated along with the way you tell the story and the hints of trouble are perfect I love this work. Although not my forte as I am not a big transmigration person anymore I still can appreciate a nice work in this genre.

  • Kayle_ezel
    Kayle_ezela year ago
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    Very generic transmigration to the future along with guideverse but I love the characters and the fact the romance isn't just love at first sight like many are here or even based on him being a guide, so it truly is a fun story but I have to take off points for the very much cliché only unique because transmigration and the usual path most stories like this take being the same but over all a favored for me in this category much better then most. I have fallen out of transmigration and realized it a unfair thing for the protagonist they get for no reason, if they like save thousands in there last life the understandable but no just randomly the one that got to keep there memory or slip through to another world. They didn't earn it but lucked into it makes me somewhat angry and does tent my view on stories so take this with a grain of salt.

  • Kayle_ezel
    Kayle_ezela year ago
    respondió a TrishWalker

    How do I edit reviews or can I only delete them, also I write on this site as well and it precisely because of this I am telling you this to prevent you from potentially missing this.

Dungeon jumper [bl]

In 2000 humanity underwent drastic changes when tunnels appeared, humans began awakening and with this awakening the trials pulled all those who awakened in to learn as quickly as possible how to use there new found energy to defend themselves. Because of the harsh conditions caused by rapid evolution of everything in the world humans had to fight for everything and all humans have a status they must fill. Aadi originates from an unawakened home as the oldest born only 5 years after the tunnels appeared, humans to try and increase standing have as many children as they can to try and hit on the chance of even one of their children being a high awakener, he has 10 younger siblings and low potential started working as a farmer at the base they live at the age of five while also cleaning up and looking after his younger siblings while his parents never bother with any except the youngest who had high potential at birth. They gave basic nutrients packs, water, and clothes while they live in a crowded three bedroom apartment when a tunnel appears in the middle of the field while working one day causing him to be dragged in. Fortunately it was the lowest slime dungeon, unfortunately he was knocked unconscious when being dragged in and buried under dirt that also poured in by the time he woke the awakened had already closed the tunnel leaving him stuck in another world. This is my first attempt at a story please tell me of any mistakes, incongruencies or grammar problems as well as your honest opinion on the concept.

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