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Typo. Sorry.
It will happen, but not till a long while.
It's the name of a month in the world.
Hey there! Selfish author review here, don't mind me too much. I'll give you a little tidbit about the story and if you're interested, feel free to give it a shot! ---- The story follows the life of Belfry from his infantile age, so the start is extremely slow paced. The beginning focuses mostly on the characters and getting you used to them and nothing really "exciting" happens until after chapter 10, but please push through. The main character can act childish sometimes and reacts to certain things unlike a person his true age, mostly because this is his first time feeling these emotions. Essentially, he may have the knowledge of an adult, but he has the emotional intelligence of a child his age. The story is mostly adventure and discovery, and the start is world building. The power system, in my opinion, is nothing really special at first, but it will be expanded on. As for the tone, sometimes it'd be happy-go-lucky, sometimes dark and sometimes tense. This all depends on the experience Belfry would be having at the moment. When it comes to update stability, I can't say for certain, but the goal is 1 chapter a day! Romance? If you are here for a romance story, certainly it will be there, but not till a long while. Harem? Hmm, there will definitely be a bunch of people that like him in that sense (not too many), but I'm not sure if to call that harem. So, I'll say no to a harem story. OP protagonist? Nope. Belfry will start out like the average mob and it will mostly come down to his creativity to help him out in earlier battles. So, if you're ok with all of these, add it to your collection, read it and give me your honest thoughts. Personally, I'd say this is the better written story of my two stories, so an instant 5 star for me!
I don't want to give a date as I'm not sure if I'll be able to make it happen then, but give or take, in 2 months. It's exam month already and I've been stuck writing the current arc for I don't even know how long. I'm sorry to ask this of any reader waiting for more chapters, but please give me a little bit more time.
I apologise for the confusion. The plot threads are still ongoing, the bond was never broken and I apologise if it wasn't obvious in that chapter. The chapters with supposedly missing counterparts are completed several chapters later and though the titles may be confusing/misleading, I intentionally made them that way for a reason. Yes, I was introducing two new crucial characters for later on in the story early on as a breakaway from the MC's story, using their evolution as a sort of checkpoint. I apologise if you find any of these frustrating, but my writing is slow paced and lots of things will be answered / make sense down the line. Thanks for giving it a shot though!
nope, lol
Hm, I was contemplating on whether to respond to this, but isn't it a little bit suspicious that the moment Hyakkun came to life, none of the Tori's sensed him till he revealed himself to them, fully aware of a way to isolate the agent from their conversations and had already decided on what position he wanted to handle?
The system is currently faulty because System Master Alpha and Beta are making some... tweaks to it.
Tori's*
Don't worry about that. Honestly, I've shown all possible wives for the protagonist in the story already. One major problem I found while writing is that I have so many characters that its hard to keep track on all of them, especially when they are all progressing in their own way and that a few more important characters still haven't shown up yet. Adding more would be bizarre/tedious for both me and the readers, I presume. XD!