Not my usual read, but definitely worth it! Fast paced action, interesting characters and diving into a world and setting that is beautifully set up. A must add to your reading collection. Can't wait for more!

I could go for some more detail. The detail of the room, what the characters see, but the story itself is solid.

I love your unique writing style. keep going!

maybe a few word changes like something besides pda? hankering? just a thought ^^

I really like how riveting this is. You pulled me in!