NaoKat

This story and writings are good, I could say. The writer gave the readers an intense pacing and a sudden change of mood at the same time. I appreciate the hard work of using multiple POVs. That's all for now!

action girl

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looks like the cliffhanger was too long sry

perhaps...

After reading and consulting with others, I'm going to be honest with my own writings (since none bothers to give one). Ignore the other reviews, they are only from review swappings. Lots of inconsistency. Too many useless descriptions for the characters and the surroundings that impact nothing at all mixed with the essential ones. This causes vital information to be missed since the readers would just skip parts that seemed useless. A very unstable update. Found some (embarrassing) plot holes and grammar mistakes (mainly pronouns, causing confusion for the readers). The world building and background were too strict, numbing and paralyzing the chance of story progression and dynamic flows. Anti-climatic results from the scenes and pointless scenarios(which is disappointing. Ouch) The characters are either too useless or too cliche, especially for the protagonists. Lots of reused (bad) tropes from other fictions. Some are too smart and too stupid at the same time. The genre says fantasy, but where? I see no epic fantasy battles, only quick and boring catfights yielding no important result for the story. Is this story for you? As long as you can bear (and anticipate) the negativenesses and enjoy reading western fantasy, perhaps this story could be for you.

The synopsis alone is intriguing for me. After reading some chapters, I like the plot and the characters; they are well-written and unique! Good job, Author! That's all for now!

oof

Sorry for the wait guys.

Her