Hyuga dirty was being show to the reader, I like this part, big PLUS... Making MC disabled but still OP, another PLUS... I just hope their is way for MC grow more like a character of Blind Hyuga Jiryoku, because when I read it reminds me of Fujitora, then if it is the case make shure that his template changes his character as well... small Minus... Overall not a bad fan fic. Thanks Author for Nice Read

My first chapter.......