Najeebullah_Khan

No im on the part when he gets out of no river and is about to go to his mothers sect😭😭😭😭 please tell me what happened so I can prepare myself.

I just read the description. Is he the rank 1 hero at 17? How does that even work. I feel like it have shallow world building because how could her be 17 and be the rank 1 hero [img=disgusted]

Huh? So your telling me after all this talking with his dad, he didn’t even mention the kids that he met along the way that were from outside the 5 sects who knew about the pocket real.

The reason why this novel isn’t doing great on webnovel is that the mc is not becoming strong himself. I understand that the author wants to make a unique story but this isn’t how you should do it. I also get that he might become stronger as the story goes on, actually I’m sure he will because he needs to get stronger to achieve his goals but many readers will give up reading before then. Like myself. I don’t want to spend money on chapters when I don’t even know which direction the story is going in. I’ll move on from this and read your other book about a necromancer.

Wait this is literally the best extra novel ever released, the one closest to perfection, and YOU AUTHOR HAVE STOPPED WRITING IT?????? I will never forgive you for this. You’ve left a void in my heart till the end of time.

I don’t wanna have to read this novel If at every moment the MC has to keep going and saving everyone I hate these type of novels because it feels like MC isn’t living his own life, instead living for other people sake.

Also these chapters are way too short author. How am I already on chapter 5 and nothing has even happened yet. NOTHING.

Currently reading my 15th extra novel or maybe the 20th, I don’t remember. What am I even doing. Nobody knows that I’m addicted, KEEP THIS A SECRET. I have big expectations author. why am I even typing this here. Don’t ask me. sometimes in the life I feel too competitive. I know someday somebody reading this will smile because they got the previous reference. Shhh keep this between me and you buddy. Hehehehhe.

Loool that’s exactly what it is haha

Let me guess you does good in this, does bad on the rest, then the teachers look at his results and be like, “huh, he did so well in this and so bad in the rest is he doing this on purpose” wow so mysterious. Place him in the class with all the other heroes. Gives his a high rank but not too high. Eventually he will go to the top of the ranking. Seriously though I don’t get the whole djinn thing. Surely they have a way to check if he’s a djinn so what is he worried about?