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It was intriguing story from the given synopsis and it was a nice start. The grammar needed to fix in order to understand more but I know you have a potential creating unique story. I've read some of like this and it was very rare. I suggest if you want to make it lighter and more exciting, you can use onomatopoeia instead of using much punctuation. But overall, it was a good novel and highly suggested to the readers. keep up the good work Author!
By reading the novel, it was a good plot and could see the intention of the author. The narration needed to be more detailed and the flaws of writing skills, it can develop in period of time. Keep up the good work! good luck author! 💜