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I really like the story so far(chap 34). The MC is well written and different from the usual tropes, he fun, and interesting rather than just being a cold calculated character. The writing is also really good with few errors. The only thing I would say, on thing that could use some work is the explanation of the power system, if that makes sense; it feels pretty confusing as he just seems to obtain stat points from killing things and the level ups appear to give random specific stats or bonus stats. Its a little rough on the edges but works. Great story overall 👍.
This would be a cool plot, just saying. But he probably has to much other stuff going on to be able to go on expeditions and stuff rn.
Please return author! This story is amazing, one of the best fan-fictions i've read and hope to continue reading. SOOOO please make a come back as I and many other readers love your story!
As long as your here ill be here author👍
Had the same exact thought