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In marvel fitz-Simmons are two separate people. I’m not sure if your addding oc content but fits-Simmons was just a nickname.

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You’ve already established this earth is different from the main continuity, you could take some liberties with the in universe content, make crossovers, or original content that was created in “response” to this new Batman. You could also just have him say it he created it for his own entertainment or to make things slightly more convenient for him.

Quick question, isn’t he getting too strong too fast? I get that count dooku has this level of skill and power but how has the mc been able to near effortlessly beat both Soren and an entire army of mutant soldiers when the template isn’t even half way through?

Chapter was good, I feel like you switched POV’s too much. I think it would be easier to tell the whole fight in a single sitting then constantly switiching perspectives as the impact of the entire fight and callum’s skill in the sword felt watered down.

Batman

Ikki kurogane or Luther strode

Could have her act like season 5/6 Beth, something to keep the MC grounded and a tad bit more humane.