The_Ram_TS

Pretty good, actually. I admit I didn't have faith in it because of the first few chapters, since I thought it would be an Adams world where the protagonist wouldn't interact with the characters in that world, But in the end I was wrong, before the protagonist met the characters of Wednesday, there was a rather interesting introduction, not at all boring, well written and not long I give this fic a 10/10

Too boring, too rambling, too slow, too problematic. There is no balance in this story, it just shows a cheap drama that is basically a protagonist complaining. Good grammar, bad narrative. The first chapter is interesting, then there's a bit of drama, and then some more, and then the cheap drama never ends.

They can't, they are programmed to do the same shit

Está horrible, gracias!

I recommend only reading the first chapter, from there on everything goes downhill. It's that kind of fic where things happen without a valid or coherent reason. There is thought from the main characters

This fic dropped in quality so fast....

Yes, sir. YES, SIRRR!!!!

Bad story, very boring.It's a slow-paced story, the problem is that it's not designed to be entertaining. The author relies more on philosophical drama. The dialogues are decent at best. Maybe semi-decent sentences wouldn't be a problem, if it weren't for the fact that it's a slow-paced story.

*I don't know why I'm losing your support" he says... Why is it?...hmmm

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