nope. I'd be a trainer to the main character or the hobo on the side of the road mumbling things that just seem to be nonsense, but its the future actually.

Good Chapter, not too happy with the cliffhanger again, but It's you so I don't expect much else. Getting nowhere fast is your thing eventually it will cost you readers, though.

I can't complain too much with your writing quality as I've been here for MDS and MVS so it just bothers me a little with grammar typos and translation into my native WI US English. I'm also starting past CH 300 so stability of updates is unknown as of yet. Story development, I give a 3 almost 4 as stated previously I have read the authors other 2 books almost to completion and I'm used to his awkward pacing and irregular use of cliffhangers, meaning far too often. Character design; I would like to see more depth to the characters, but sometimes it just takes a while especially for the core characters also i understand that there are backstory, present time and future growth so it may be difficult to weave the three aspects together. World background is the author best skill, but at times this feels inconsistent, but I do like it keep up the good work. I have two points of outsider input one author to another. first can we get some more wolves in the pack, and two can we get some weird wolf variations, colors of fur abilities, weaknesses resistances, a wolf not allergic to chocolate. thanks and also a shoutout to devils advocate you do wonders.

He's getting better, but there is an art to cliffhangers.

So far I'm liking it, still not too fond of your pacing. 'My dragon system' was my favorite so far, keep up the good work, also can we get a few more wolves in the pack

he is just messing around until he can get into the sect he wants. trying to get attention.

happy face

thanks for the chapter, could go for more but it takes hours to write and only minutes to read,

like it but the fruit will either taper off or to upgrade it to still being useful later depends on characters usage.

moooooorrrrrrreeeee!!!!!!!!!!!

good story so far the pacing is great, instead of long grind arcs, its just cannon fodder, and the mc is just a little unhinged, not enough to ruin his likeability, but not chosen one plot armor.

I need more chapters

Thank you.

Thats how its done son.

good novel. I just get sick, of the stats updates,

great chapter.

Just jump it'll be fun.

exp

here kitty kitty kitty.

yeah exp