Colin_Holman

don't worry I don't mind the retcon 😁

it's pretty good so far😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

you can almost see the writer getting better and better the only problem I have with it is that he seems to want to change the characters abilities from when he first started

good chapter

I'm sure that there is some YouTube videos that would show you how if you're interested

most of the women in the story do as well

I enjoy this story very much and have interest in concepts characters good put into situations that are difficult for them but not impossible

I have a bad filling about kirlunst

at is a good point

this is a weird but interesting story I hope it continues I put the writing quality at four stars because the story is stuck only in first person and the story development down because little seem to happen in the story after 26 chapters