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From what I have gathered, the time in the novel is way before Ash was even born. so i think, team rocket didn't even exist at this point

Good start

Just read couple of chapters and i love it... keep going author.. you r doing well.. i dont know how you could write 2 novels at once.. seems quite a hassle

70th

This is a good novel. Normally, novels which have system tends to be very fast and its gets boring after that.. but this is intersting.. good job author

Did not like it... mc always is op and never loses and all the girls love him and **** him... how didi this get 18 million views.. i m surprised .. it is a pokemon fanfic.. for chriest shake... why include harem... there are also many grammer mistakes

This is very well written. It is not like typical fanfic, where they donot care about world background and story line.. normally.. mc powers up way faster and the rivals are always wrong.. this chapter changed that... it showed that rival bruno.. who we thought was bad.. also had a reason.. so very well written

Nice chapters.. there are many clarifications

Yep

Unlike other naruto fanfic.. i like this one