Gone for good, I reread my own work after a couple of months. And was disgusted by it. So I decided to remove it. That’s just how my brain work, if something isn’t perfect it just keeps bothering me. Add to that, the fact I had basically written p*rn made my hate for this fanfic grow even more. As it was basically fan service and something I hated doing . So yeah this fanfic is 100% not coming back and if it ever does it’ll be completely different.

Ok! What the actual **** !!! Thanks for letting me know they took mine as well WTF?!!? https://tl.rulate.ru/book/48416

😂😂😂, bro I felt that. First story I ever wrote in this platform. I ended up deleting 2-3 months later. Simply because my Mc had a mental breakdown due to him slowly dying from sickeness. Next thing I know, a bunch of new comments with the same thing on repeat. ‘Beta Mc!’ ‘Why is he crying!’ and all that dumb sh*t. I honestly felt how human your Mc was and how he experienced his emotions and mental breakdown like any normal being would. But the the s*x craved virgins had to strike again. And try to ruin a great fanfic. What pisses me off is that I know for a fact that most people believing themselves Alpha of Alphas would would shit their pants in a simple mugging. But think they would stay calm if they committed murder. Like what!? Anyway, your fanfic was a great one. I’ll try finding it but if I don’t it’s farewell. I hope you find a better platform with better audience. ✌️

That’s mainly because of the way she was portrayed in Bleach. Simply a busty flirtatious woman. Barely any fight to her name and little to no character development. She was basically made into eye candy. In my story the closest character to her personality wise is Roronoa Zoro.

Great chapter! Thanks for the chapter 😄

Not to judge or anything but that’s really OOC of Carlisle. Carlisle was part of the Volturi at one point, sees them as old friends. All the Cullens agree that the Volturi are a necessity to the vampire world. They are feared and uphold justice above all else. I mean they’re pretty good rulers with Three simple rules. 1- Do not reveal vampires existence to humans. 2- Do not turn infants since they can’t control themselves. 3- No one is above the law. That means that they themselves have to uphold their own rules. People see them as evil simply because they feast on humans. Like isn’t that what vampires are supposed to do? I’m not complaining since it’s your story your rules. But I’m only clarifying and giving information about them in a senses.

True her gift would be OP otherwise

😂😂😂 without heels of course 😅

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Nope I took a break but now I’m back. I planned on making a chapter last week but couldn’t since school restarted. So I’ll probably type one this week hopefully 😅

She didn’t cheat on him check your facts if you wanted to have the titans break up then do so with a simple reason. If you’ve actually read the comic you’d know she wasn’t in a relationship with him when she supposedly cheated. She had lost her memory then she talked with nightwing all night the day before as he told her about himslef. She did kiss himthqt night as she mistook the line let’s talk and kissed him. Something she is known to do. The next day, she had *** with Roy. While not being in a relationship. Roy thought she was with Jason but he was mistaken. That’s why he asked and that’s what is shown in the picture. And it wouldn’t make sense for her character to cheat on him. She left the fucking planet when they broke up because she couldn’t be in the same planet and not be in a relationship with him. Here’s a link that explains everything. https://comicvine.gamespot.com/articles/five-revelations-about-starfire-from-red-hood-and-/1100-144293/

🙏 much appreciated 😄

😂😂😂, Thanks 🙏

Damn 4 chapters in 3 hours!!! Do you have any tips it takes a lot of my time to write?

FYI, Punk Hazard wasn’t on the StrawHats log pose. It was actually due to an intercepted emergency radio call that they went on that island. So yeah, he shouldn’t have been able to go there if he only followed the Log pose. But it doesn’t change anything your story your rules after all.

Nope I specified it in the training chapter. In a single year he could either have both but not master any. Or have one and master it completely. So he chose to master Armament.

Artisan: a worker in a skilled trade, especially one that involves making things by hand. It works both ways, an artisan is someone who can basically do it all. Instead of specifically clothes and only clothes.