Smiitaa
Hello, I'm a writer, I hope you'll support my writing. And feel free to give any remarks about my work, I hope you'll enjoy reading my stories here
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I see, thank you, I really appreciate that ✨✨
thank youu✨✨
I recently had the opportunity to delve into your work, and I commend your effort in creating a captivating narrative. However, I would like to offer a constructive review that highlights the need for further refinement and increased engagement within the story. While your writing style is commendable, there is room for improvement in terms of making the work more attractive and heightening the suspense that your piece demands. Just sharing my opinion and for sure your work is adorable, just keep going.
your work showcases the potential and demonstrates a skillful command of storytelling. However, to fully captivate readers and create a more immersive experience, it is crucial to put more effort into crafting an attractive narrative that elicits a stronger emotional response. Elevating the level of suspense will allow your audience to feel more engrossed and enthralled throughout the tale. Keep up the good work, and with a bit more attention to these aspects, I do not doubt that your future endeavors will grip readers with an irresistible sense of dread and fascination. ✨💙
Shapely ✨
Hi! I'll take that into consideration, I really appreciate that, thank you. Love you too.✨
Well, I'll be the first one who support me, Idk what's my work looks like but for me, it's not the best for sure, but it's my hard work and my creative writing and I should say keep going ✨☺
Nice shot ✨
the way u use babies actions to let the dragon make his parents resent on him is such a beautiful and adorable way .. ur way on description is too fantastic as well .. I'm really enjoying this .. it's not about the story but it's about ur way on writing .. really I hope continue reading that with the same joy ✨