Kalushar_Vulpine
The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents. -H.P Lovecraft
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Kalushar_Vulpine16 days agoComentado porThis is awful writing, just the most forced garbage I’ve ever read
- Kalushar_Vulpine21 days agoComentado por
Go to other worlds how? Bro what is this awful lore
- Kalushar_Vulpine21 days agoComentado por
Awful dialogue
- Kalushar_Vulpine21 days agoComentado por
So having no ability isn’t rare, not even uncommon. But people don’t use weapons anymore? And there’s barely a peace treaty in effect? Man this writer contradicts himself worse than a skinny chef.
- Kalushar_Vulpine21 days agoComentado por
Bro, the main character is a simp, I’m calling it now.
- Kalushar_Vulpine21 days agoComentado por
Not many people carry weapons? In a world constantly under threat of war? Is this writer smoking something?
- Kalushar_Vulpine21 days agoComentado por
That’s the cringiest name I’ve heard in a long time. Vorden Blade, cringe.
- Kalushar_Vulpine21 days agoComentado por
Bro can’t do math.
- Kalushar_Vulpine21 days agoComentado por
Please let this story get better. So far this writing is just… terrible, did this guy not edit at all?
- Kalushar_Vulpine22 days agoComentado por
Not a great start. Poor writing, but we’ll see if it gets better. So far the plot and lore is nonsensical. 2/5
