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Pau_Lisbjerg

Pau_Lisbjerg

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2020-06-20 Se unióDenmark
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg6mth
    Comentado por

    Merry Christmas, for what it's worth. 🙂🎄

    Maybe we will meet again in the future, but if we do not, I truly wish you well in whatever life may have instore for you.
    Altering Skyrim
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a JaceDeVolld
    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
    RE: THE LEGEND!
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    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a KaijuLover
    'Seeing the numbers go up is super satisfying' Daiko added.
    RE: THE LEGEND!
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
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    I can't tell if this is a translated work or not, but the writing quality is all over the place. The start is very poorly scripted, and does a poor job of establishing the protagonist in a way that paint a clear picture is appearance. The first villanous act is also rather poorly done, even if it is a take on The Dark Knight's Joker ship social experiment scene. while the idea is sound the execution is terrible. the thing is just put together right away without any kind of buildup, Who are the goons he hired as instigators? how did he acquire the explosives? HOW THE FU*K DID HE AQUIRE ACCESS TO STATE BROADCASTING STATIONS!? There's so many plot holes that it's genuinely painful for me to try and piece together. All in all, i would personally recommend you read something else.

    Este libro ha sido eliminado.
  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a gamabunda4873

    Now there's an idea...

    With a heavy heart he approached the shop and stood in front of it. He really wanted to make the old shop back at its peak but he didn't know how. It was at that moment he heard a sound.
    The Shopkeeper of Konoha
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a DrVegapunk
    Malicious, Magical, Malfoy (reincarnation)
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
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    So as long as he can get the finer basics down the "system" rewards him with greater information?

    It was immensely useful. I had learned the fire sorcery skill after finding a place I could practice. The skill description provided me all with information I needed to improve the skill further. It told me of the highest temperature I could reach, how fine my control was, how much magic I needed for a particular usage, and so on.
    Malicious, Magical, Malfoy (reincarnation)
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a FanHarem

    Well, when you go to a bank and trade one currency for another you normally pay for services rented. Currency speculation is when you buy a currency hoping it increases in value versus the money you initially traded with. from what i understand from the thread below i think he was asking if he could not use he's own trade system for currency exchange rather than a method for obtaining more.

    Although... Jackal does suffer a 20% reduction in price but that's that.
    Is it Wrong to Employ Cute Girls in a Store?
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a Helel

    How many can afford a price-tag rounding a small fortune?

    'What a bro,' Jackal nods.
    Is it Wrong to Employ Cute Girls in a Store?
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
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    Ok, this bid was funny ngl.

    "And there you have it folks, according to the police the hunk... ehem. the blonde man that started the fight broke 13 noses, and sent 20 people to the hospital. After a careful analysis, the man was found to be clinically insane, We still don't know his identity and are still searching for the club, "Ass Garden" if any of you know anything please call the police."
    The Marvelous Superman
    Otras · Passerby_Venne
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    Comentado por

    Right, so far i've been able to go through this fic with only a handful of instances of irking, otherwise this fiction is serviceable enough.

    Source: https://powerlisting.fandom.com/wiki/Bio-Electric_Aura
    The Marvelous Superman
    Otras · Passerby_Venne
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    Comentado por

    Honestly, in the universe of superheroes everything is true and nothing is right. the only thing that truly matters is if the rules and limitations apply correctly. for every 'thing' there needs to be a 'counter thing'. So im going into this with a mostly blank sheet of expectations.

    If you don't care about such things and just want to read a superman fanfic then please do read, it would make me happy to have lots of people read and enjoy my work 😊
    The Marvelous Superman
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a HarkenEliwood

    The giant faction had only really been mentioned in passing. i'd guess this was done to incorporate a lose plot thread, regardless of how flimsy the circumstance is.

    While battles were raging, the ground shook as the group of giants charged straight towards the mages hiding in the mountain. They were led by a surprisingly beautiful giantess multiple heads taller than the others. She wore thick steel armor on her chest and legs while wielding a massive two-handed ebony Warhammer almost as tall as her. Anything in her way, be it friend or foe, was pulverized and sent flying by her enormous strength.
    Altering Skyrim
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
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    Maybe we will meet again in the future, but if we do not, I truly wish you well in whatever life may have instore for you.
    Altering Skyrim
    Derivados de juegos · Pepey_LePew
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a Pepey_LePew

    Ok, that's a pretty boss looking thing though.

    Her entrance was made all the more dramatic as her mount took a step forward. The armored humanoid was as tall as a giant. Black and gold trimmed ebony and dwarven armor plating covering every inch of it. There was no obvious helmet, and the main body portion was rounded like an egg. Huge metal arms nearly reached the ground from the massive, spiked pauldrons. Legs thicker than tree trunks supported the whole thing and left small craters in the ground from its insane weight. Purplish smoke rose from the joints and seams of the armored monstrosity giving it an almost ethereal feeling.
    Altering Skyrim
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a HarkenEliwood

    Alliance of convenience?

    While battles were raging, the ground shook as the group of giants charged straight towards the mages hiding in the mountain. They were led by a surprisingly beautiful giantess multiple heads taller than the others. She wore thick steel armor on her chest and legs while wielding a massive two-handed ebony Warhammer almost as tall as her. Anything in her way, be it friend or foe, was pulverized and sent flying by her enormous strength.
    Altering Skyrim
    Derivados de juegos · Pepey_LePew
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    Comentado por

    This has been a ride and a half. Your ability in this fic to improvise scenarios that feel thematically appropriate to the various characters while also taking cues from comment suggestions has made this fiction a joy to read through the years. I hope one day to see your talent applied to another scripture one day, otherwise, thank you for all of it.

    [AN]: Okay everyone, this is it. The final chapter. If you are reading this, I appreciate you making it this far. Hopefully you enjoyed it at least a little, or that it sparked your own imagination like it did mine. Thank you for taking the time to read it. Enjoy.
    Altering Skyrim
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
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    "I live when a reference comes together!"

    Grabbing two large crocodile like daedra with his telekinesis and slashing open their throats with his dragonesque talons, Rictus couldn't help laughing while reveling in the chaos and slaughter around him. He loved it when a plan came together.
    Altering Skyrim
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    respondió a HarkenEliwood

    Same...

    "The vampire is no more."
    Altering Skyrim
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  • Pau_Lisbjerg
    Pau_Lisbjerg1yr
    Comentado por

    Heh. 😎

    [AN]: Heh, I actually had the idea for killing someone after trolling them with Meridia's beacon since the very start of the fanfic. Glad I could finally use it on someone.
    Altering Skyrim
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