Doge_Britt

Loved this chapter, curious to see where Clarence decelops from here

Clarence needs to see a psychiatrist or two..

*Literal gunshot happens* Sane people: What was that?! Air Hostess: Just a daily occurence

Knowing emery.. He definetly got trapped there 😂

Fig Tree is my favorite character in this story and I hope to see his reappearance often

I really like the story as a whole (even if its not very far in so far). The background does it well for ne since its explained but not gone into detail to so we can learn more as we go as well as how it affects the characters relationships. The writing is also good but sometimes feels like side characters are skipped over a bit but overall well done. I also look forward to how the story unfolds but I feel that there needs to be a lottle more conflict between Noam and Nate since even though they are mates I feel it would do good if their conflict didn’t change from nate hating him to starting to fall in love with him so soon but thats just me and Idk what your planning so Ill just have to wait and see. Also this book has potential to be good so I hope you can continue to update if you have time I know I would appreciate the read. Also your a talented writer :)

Why not a bit of both~

The lotus seeds??

Wait a minute.. Elium = El ?!?!

But there is also the idea that The Emperor might get jealous of what he thinks might have happened and might start favoring Yan more