GodCrimson

Really good. this will be hit if author don't lose passion and reason. I'm more into to solo op mc so i read till halfway but it's still good can't hide shiny jewel even with my biased thought. I like the idea of how author decided to make mc to travel between world (my opinion: it could be better if mc was solo :P) he thought pretty resonable. i lost myself good 5 min thinking about hxh and danmachi power structor and even though i think top power nen user's are not that weak well good idea

Well its lacking in in depth story and character dev, emotion etc. its good if you like to read db fanfic it should be. mc will be op and its just kinda smooth for him i don't like manuplating author its like whole world is trying to kill mc i dont like thag kind of story but this is kinda too smooth haha

i agree with mc decision its really rational, and i like rational mc they will really with own strength grow strong unlike emotional mc are somehow got lucky and get stronger they do a lot of irrational decision and well you know but it makes them more human ? idk but i still like rational mc thanks for chapter

blonde blonde blonde i already forgot progtanist's name -_-

yeah i believe it was 385 per day 2 month it should be 23100. almost enough for straight grandmaster he overlooked this or just didnt want to overpowered mc quickly -_-

Wonderful fanfic i almost never really read till last chapter but this one forced me. I gotta say you are have a good talent. People who are hestitating to read just give it go even if it is not your cup of tea you wont regret it that you read.

Soo .. these watching people can watch while they bath or go toilet and dont have any privecy ? its kinda ...

Its hard to read too complex

good job

same