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TIFOEL

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2020-06-12 Se unióGlobal
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  • TIFOEL
    TIFOEL3 months ago
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    It's a rather drearily written fan fiction. I was triggered at the moment with the attack of the second akatsuki inside konoha, and Danzo Orochimaru Kisame and Itachi inside the village and everything is early for everyone... delusion... and this despite the fact that the lookout had to rise after the first attack... zetsu could have found her in Konoha himself, I don't want to read any more

  • TIFOEL
    TIFOEL3 months ago
    respondió a Rizki_Caturianto

    Is Eisen from Bleach? I'm glad I stopped at chapter 25, it's stupidly unbalanced.

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    TIFOEL3 months ago
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    Oh, how annoying this story is! 25-something chapters and I couldn't stand it. The author changes the story as he wants. The time frame is an empty sound for him. Events are jumping. workouts are just percentages of the load... and it seemed to start normally, but then Neji is not there. Then he became friends with NARUTO... and this is just nonsense. A reasonable person would not be friends with Naruto. He is annoying as a child!. And the ROOT is also watching him. Just think about it. He has a good start. There are scrolls from the parents. He has time. But he shows everyone his strength, although it's stupid to do it in advance. Wait until the template is filled out by 50 percent and then apply for early delivery. A little slower but safer. The thing that bothered me the most was the EARLIER exam. this is strange. Such events have been planned for years in advance. Why the hell has the canon changed?

  • TIFOEL
    TIFOEL3 months ago
    respondió a Mattgz

    https://author.today/work/series/11968

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    TIFOEL3 months ago
    respondió a Emperio

    https://author.today/work/series/11968

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    TIFOEL3 months ago
    respondió a Kalsapher

    https://author.today/work/series/11968

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    TIFOEL3 months ago
    respondió a Daoistk8u1Ip

    https://author.today/work/series/11968

  • TIFOEL
    TIFOEL3 months ago
    respondió a DeathE

    https://author.today/work/series/11968

  • TIFOEL
    TIFOEL3 months ago
    respondió a Onei

    https://author.today/work/series/11968

  • TIFOEL
    TIFOEL3 months ago
    respondió a SalveYing

    https://author.today/work/series/11968