Very well done! I love your writing style! The way you describe the characters and the things they go through is absolutely awesome! Keep writing!

I'm not a huge fan of romance stories. However, this one is very interesting. There are very few to no mistakes, the plot is entertaining, and the characters are understandable. I will definitely keep reading and looking for more chapters as they come out.

Way to go. I generally do not like romance stories of any kind. However, this one has my attention. I absolutely love it.

I love this story and can't wait to read what happens next! The plot is awesome and the characters are fun and interesting. I look forward to reading many more chapters of this story! Keep writing!

I love this book! Usually I would not read anything that has anything to do with the tired vampire or werewolf love story, but this one is amazing. Well done! I will definitely keep reading this!

I absolutely love this story. There are few to no mistakes. The plot draws you in so that you want to keep reading more. I will definitely continue reading every chapter of this!

I love this story!! The plot is awesome, the characters are believable, and the way you tell it is amazing! Keep it up! I can't wait to read the next chapters!

I absolutely love your descriptions and details. The plot and story are beautifully believable! I highly recommend this story to anyone regardless of genre preference! Keep writing, I will definitely keep reading this!

I am absolutely absorbed in this. There are almost no errors at all, keep writing! I love it!

I absolutely love this story! The plot is great, the characters are fun and exciting, and the story line is really deep. If you like romance that pulls you into the story, you have to check this one out. I will be continuing the chapters and watching for more.

Yes, an edit will serve the story well. Once you have proofread and edited all the misspellings and grammatical errors out of the story, more readers can understand and enjoy what you have written.

I absolutely love how you're not afraid to use slang and the vocabulary of today's society. It makes your story all the more fun and entertaining.

Typically, I do not read romance stories. However, this author has really grabbed my attention with this story. (No Spoilers) If you like the fun banter that goes on between siblings and friends, and a romance story that steps out of the ordinary- I highly recommend this story! I am officially hooked!

As a genuinely picky reader, I'm not big on romance stories of any kind. However, this one has effectively caught my attention. Wow! I love the development, and the story line already.

I think your word processor failed you in the third line where there are two question mark diamonds. I'm enjoying the story so far, btw. Great character development, I love the banter. It's already fun and interesting!

The plot is very interesting. The chapters are very short and have some grammatical errors that need attention. However, I look forward to seeing more as this writer develops.

You're absolutely right! I have seen far too many books that are lacking in information. This one is definitely not one of those! Kudos to the author!

I am not much for romance stories, but can't stop reading this one! I love it!

Hi, this story contains a lot of good elements. However, there are numerous errors and flow problems that makes the story very confusing. I will not go into detail here. I will only point out that the characters, plot, development, grammar, and spelling need serious attention before moving forward with any more chapters. A good proofread and edit would serve this story well.

Hi, I am truly enjoying this story. I love the mystery, and suspense woven in with the fantasy. Very unique and interesting, I look forward to reading more as the story unfolds.