NightlyWinter
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NightlyWinter2 years agorespondió a DraconicWulfAnd thank you for taking the time to read it.
- NightlyWinter2 years agorespondió a DraconicWulf
thx
- NightlyWinter2 years agorespondió a DraconicWulf
Be sure to write a review when you get the opportunity :)
- NightlyWinter2 years agorespondió a CassTheEevee
Sorry for the late reply. I fixed it.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - NightlyWinter3 years agorespondió a JohnMichaels
And thank you for reading my novel. Leave a review when you have the time!
- NightlyWinter3 years agorespondió a Shuishe
What language is that, if I may ask?
- NightlyWinter3 years agorespondió a JohnMichaels
Wow, incredible! Be sure to write a review when you get the chance!
- NightlyWinter3 years agorespondió a nighmora
Perhaps.
- NightlyWinter3 years agoPublicado por
This story is on to a good start. The characters have conflicts that makes people feel sad and feel for them. Good enough at least. The depth of the story and characters are lacking a little, but not enough to put off the readers. There are spelling and punctuation mistakes, but it's not too severe to confuse someone badly. In the end, keep it up! The story is good so far.
- NightlyWinter3 years agorespondió a jdog216
The MC ranking up is permanent. On how he do it is different.
