Nate_Gong
I am a man with almost as much taste as the plot holes in xinxia novels
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unfortunately he is the main character, so this does not apply, as far as thr author is concerned, we have no luck based fellow here so it is automatically 0% chance of success.
this author is goated. Confirmed
"been right so far, will continue to trust"= "Why did I trust, there is nothing infallible, should have trained other means of detection" this is a common plot line when they start with a strong sensory ability
holy, why is this way too real...
so, a nice seared human with some quality carmilization
or, he has a lot of people that get paid less then a percent of what they get, while the resources channel up. the only way this system would be worth anything if this way, is if the base of this pyramid is ever growing.
like cat claws couldn't cause serious lacerations before
he'll of a title if I have ever seen one
my most basic gamer sense says you load to the last auto save, but my gut tells me that it would start an interesting story arc with some dragon balls potentially involved
PLOT CONVOENENCE!?!??@?@
that is the last nail in the coffin before Ookie gets to be an annoyance for our guy for a bit
most underrated comment of all time
the novel is decently well written, but rhey way it reads is something close to a fan-fic as you come in with very little knowledge of the world, but most things are poorly explained or recapped like you are supposed to have some pre existing knowledge of this world. Other details just kinda pop-up, and there are a few jumps in logic or gaps in logic, such as the MC's ability to ignore injuries just because his pain tolerance is really high. that is not how that works, if the muscle fibers get cut, you can't really apply force through a muscle if it connects to nowhere or how broken bones which would function or breakdown when used work juuuuust fine if you ignore the pain.I do like this story, but if the author could go back and make revisions so the story is consistent, and plot bandaids are not used or needed that would make this story many times or pleasant to read.If you have read this far, thank you for your time
what I was thinking...
his own foot was there first
remember this guy is currently rated at the same level of attractive as a humanoid pig rn...