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Dawn_Morgana month agoPublicado porgood story. I've read it 3 times now and still fun.
- Dawn_Morgan3 months agoComentado por
the story is very good and easy to read. yes there are a few words mixed up, but it's is still easy to follow and enjoyable .
- Dawn_Morgan4 months agoPublicado por
the book is holding my interest. can't wait for more
- Dawn_Morgan6 months agoPublicado por
needs a little editing in a few places. Chapter 5 should be the state of the art tub, not the state of the heart tub. just 1 of the things, but overall, it's a good read. some of the words are messed up like it was talk to text ( heart , art) ( howebit, how about it)
- Dawn_Morgan6 months agoPublicado por
the story is well thought out and written. will read it again.
- Dawn_Morgan7 months agorespondió a Blue_Bird_0758
yu
- Dawn_Morgan8 months agoComentado por
you have bean paste twice she must need a lot of it.[img=recommend]
- Dawn_Morgan8 months agorespondió a Dreamer_in_daze
thank you for writing a good story
- Dawn_Morgan8 months agoComentado por
in the first paragraph, is it supposed to be a "big fish in a small pond" or a " big finish in a small pond" that was written ????
- Dawn_Morgan8 months agoPublicado por
pretty good read so far . a few spelling hiccups but still easy to read