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You're not wrong.

Hey, I really appreciate this well-thought-out and detailed review! I totally get the updating critique, but as a full-time youtuber and podcaster who does this just for fun, it's hard to make enough time for frequent updates. I could try to rush the chapters out, but with this many characters involved, the story would probably become incoherent very quickly. That's why I take my time.

If you want to provide actual useful feedback, being specific would be nice. Your comment doesn't give me any actionable ways to improve.

Dream is a minecraft youtuber bro

Do you really think that I would do that?

Thanks!

No, I was on a holiday hiatus. Been really busy over the holidays.

When the same speaker's lines go on into the next paragraph, you don't need to include that ending quote.

He was reincarnated into the fantasy world as a baby. He was an ***** in the normal world.

False. Watch the outro on his Nuxanor Channel.