CockroaChan

Bro the concept is good even the story pace is good but the author destroyed it by trying to make everyone around MC is OP. Hell author even forgot about all the side characters. Where the hell is ritchie,Melina,Armstrong and other player on the Skyline Continent? Author forget he spoonfed MC with information but then forgot he already spoonfed MC with that info and tell MC again. Dialogue of the story is bland further into the novel. Even the smut scene author use the same word for every woman MC have s*x with. And whats the point of game system when you don’t even show the game status like wtf? I have waaaay more thing im dissatisfied with but this is all the main problems others only some minor problem.

Idk why but the author always forgot that he already wrote the part where mc know about something like the shadow world was the immortal world before. But now he tell mc again about this and mc somehow learns about it for the 1st time when HE SUPPOSED TO ALREADY KNOW ABOUT THAT INFORMATION. This is not the 1st time this happened. Moreover what happened to normal players after the old world destroyed? Didn’t they can’t log out? Mc forgot about them just like that when his brother in law was one of them🤣

No

Moaarrrrrr

THAT'S OP!!

Well they're weak😭

ShArE YoUr oPIniOn pls Hahahahhahahahaha And what ignore them

Why are you not responding bro google shamed you?

Hahahahahahha "make your own" classic. Imagine can't handle a criticism and get mad.

I'm not enjoying this chapter maybe later chapter when my mind cooled off from the madness in this chapter and i will be off for 3 day for stacking(i will still vote power stone) to stay calm. Bye/Ciao/Adios.