DeadpanDeme

Thanks for the chapter! I wonder if Belrick will be like recognized by one of the Demon Gods

Lemin to be confused

No need to see when you can sense

Thanks for the chapter! Now… is Adam’s ability activated by sending mana out and using his mana to compress things? Or is mana used up in his body and magically compresses things from afar? If the former is true that means Adam could theoretically intercept telepathic messages being sent through mana.

You haven’t leveled up and you’re a threatening presence to him…

The narrator gives up too much information freely, every three paragraphs has information that the narrator is just telling the reader. There is no suspense, no lead in, just straight explanations or telling the reader things. Which diminishes the value of any information if all of it is being told rather than shown. Every character is also treated like a joke, it makes it difficult to want to develop a connection to the characters. This is my current opinion as of chapter 15, this may change.

Idk why this guy is stuck on him being Gustavo's child. It would be terrible writing if he was. 20 day battle, 1000 souls summoned, millions used to be in their pantheon, running out of celestial energy. Literally no way for the timeline to make that work.

Awakening*

Probably should replace book with books at the minimum. Best would be to change it to the novels

Lovely word choice