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franzjosef

franzjosef

Lv15
2020-05-06 Se unióUnited States
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  • franzjosef
    franzjosef10 months ago
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    we truly are getting closer to one misunderstanding and a aloof protag from the synthetic revolution

  • franzjosef
    franzjosefa year ago
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    im enjoying the misunderstanding as well, and it reminds me of Overlord. thanks for the updates

  • franzjosef
    franzjosefa year ago
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    Overall, i think the story is good with the world building as well as keeping the MC interesting with a balance of character flaws and power levels between the characters he meets. That being said, i feel as though there are too many characters to keep track of and remember. Im at the school arc, and it feels like im being dumped with 10 people that i have to follow their relationship with the MC just as i was getting familiar with his previous relationships prior to the time skip. i feel that instead of making a new character, you could get the same effect with some random mob whose name the MC doesn't feel worth his brain power to remember.