AngstR

Aight... I'll start my ranting... Dude became god(mf even have a omnipotence), have tons of harem, lived long enough than those foreigner floaties on the void... For some reason reincarnated/reborn to new identity... Technically speaking it's still himself so he should inherit the trait of his predecessor.. yet still have a problem with relationship... Classic.

That remind me... You genben otto.... So now it's she... And that means... technically... She could attain Valkyrie power?(that lifespan bs? Well it's otto were talking about... And her goal is almost finished).... Wouldn't it better to buff her since Bianka got a better mentor?... Also the original story has thrown awry with FC status that still alive and have portion of the world as their domain...

Core of Void could just literally tearing a space... Imagine you just opened a tear within enemy body then closed it(They never used it in-game though..)... It's the biggest cheat actually compared to other Cores... elemental is meh...

That's kinda cultured... Shockwave should start learning to bombing enemy like a certain loli....

Author.. if by a chance there's a war arc in multiverse level... Bring Leo to GFL universe.. isn't that place infamous for it's PTSD... That would be nice..

Even though the writing style is torture.. and the plot change is too fast... This is not bad... It's pretty good tbh.. Note: Pay attention to comas dot and other sign..

Fast paced execution is messed up... I'll be honest here... The characters are lack of personality... It's more like an RPG games NPC than a novel cast.. The interaction is bit forced.. other than that I didn't see any problem (Even of there's a few grammar error at least the capital is well displayed..)

Get a gist of the half content... Probably could understand it .. if I burn some brain cells...

Fast paced ruined the drama atmosphere... And not only that the characters became lacked at expressing their emotions because of the fast paced..(though I have other things that I need to pointed out.. those are the most things that I thinks is important) it's not too bad anyway...

Fast paced... Wish fulfilment kind like... I will give writing for 4.5 out of 5(Most of fanfic usually ignore Capital and few typo) it's actually good but no too great...