dalekvim

Your writing is really amazing! I feel so sorry for that girl. I hope things get better for her.

This is a really cute story with lots of good descriptions - the author really knows what they are doing. The story is about Emma and Noah two children that try to solve a mystery about their town together.

This is really good! I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow, this is a really cool first chapter! Emma is really cute, and Noah is the love interest, right? Looks like childhood friends to lovers 🥰

This is a really great first chapter. You write very well!

I like how the story is going so far. Maybe try using a grammar checker to catch small errors. Looking forward to the next chapter, add oil!