Ginette_Kneller

Isla. how come you're so thick. Missed opportunities. tsk ask tsk

love the story but was a little slow in places

left me wanting. what happened next. the end was way to open ended

I live thd story. a story of love and revenge. The male lead rescuing the female lead from a life of servitude and abuse. He may have been mean but he loved her. just 2 issues. the drawing and colouring kept changing for no reason. The hair colour on dome characters changed. Then changed back. The same dish outfits. Secondly the main lead female character was adopted. Her adoptive family had a secret about her parents but it was never revealed.

I liked the story but it did confuse me at times. there was a couple of time I lost the plot because it dripped ahead or missed details. The characters hair colour kept changing too but overall the story was good.

only a few minor errors when names change but otherwise a great story. I would've liked to see the main character reunited with their family at the end though

some minor errors In the text but other fantastic. I couldn't put it down. I love Jessica Hall's stories. they pull you from page one and keep you hooked

overall not bad but it lost it towards the end. it was like some of it was missing some how. The character seemed to suddenly want to be together. Even after they had been pulling away from each other the entire story. weird

This is going to be good. They're heading for a big fall and don't even know it

wow well played Tangning. well played