Melody_F

She did say she wanted to kill her so I doubt she would have stopped with a simple slap.

Maybe I missed something but shouldn't she have turned back into a cat by now???

Didn't she get an SSS rank Dagger?? Why is she still using a rolling pin?

Looks like the grandfather has a brain, but the rest of the family didn't inherit.

why dispise a child for an injury they received during childhood. I mean, if he was in a situation that his feet can be burned that badly doesn't that mea his parent should have been watching him.

I had to stop after hitting chapter 8 because the wrong story was put in and hasn't been corrected. Some authors like to advertise their other works which is fine but at least put the missing chapters in. The story goes from her slashing a door down to some pawnshop incident and a sudden character growth without explaination (this is why chapters shouldnt be missing). I couldnt keep reading after that. However I do think it has potential to be a good story. I doubt the missing chapters would bother this much if it wasnt. It just needs some maintence...... And if it was translated maybe get a second opinion.

Poor guy. I hope this new life is everything he wishes for.

as my creative writing teacher always said "Show don't tell"