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Wonder what would happen if Gray Matter was thrown into this mix?
It technically is possible. Heck you could turn into alien if the watch scans their DNA.
Why not just discribe it as a strange hour glass symbold?
It seems you switched POV from Charlie to the MC here without noticing.
I think your meant our rather than are here.
Confirmed MC is simp.
I cant help but Kin and Gin are refrences to Doctor Stones Kinro and Ginro am I the only one?
While they are different. i habe to point out that One belongs to Roman version of the Pantheon. And the other belongs to greek. it’s a common think where Rome would link their gods with others from dofferent pantheons. Most mythological experts believed it to be a way to help intergrate their beliefs. Heck in one story where the gods are chased Away by Typhon it talks about how the gods ran away to egypt disguised as animals. https://youtu.be/KL6o6glC6Fg Good example of what I mean.
Only complain I have is that the chapters seem a little short but that may because of the writing style. Other than that no complaints. It actually fixed one of the major problems with system stories which is state spamming and diving into to much detail.
If I remember corrent in Legends she’s called Abolith.