Ne_ly

Great chapter and writing. I really felt all the emotions being conveyed.

And really good writing as well....

This chapter had some of the best poetry of this story. Really good...

It's a fairly good Naruto fanfiction. The update rate is very quick and with a bundle of chapters as at now. The single mindedness of the Mc is only slightly off-putting. The interactions with the various characters could be a lot more natural. Mc also seems a little too eager to please the higher-ups. However, so far so good.

A unique story. An oc Nara that's basically a genuis/prodigy with monstrous never-before-seen talent and bloodline. Characters are fleshed out fairly well, plot is coherent and worldbuilding seems to be great. Powerful levels are semi-defined, which i love. Overall, a great story. My critique for now is how the reactions and behaviours of some characters don't necessarily match my expectations of the actual characters in the actual anime. But i guess that's why this is a fanfiction.

Great novel. Nice integration with real world factors. Great character development and progression of storyline. Some mini plot lines are not expounded upon clearly, however it's still a satisfying and enjoyable read.

finally, the timeskip

mmhmmn...

Awaiting mask's sales pitch....

It looked like it might have been a bit interesting. Until I actually started to read it. The sentence formation, the grammar is all not up to par. Needs a lot of improvement. . . . .