Hayden_W4lker

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Sharp observation, yeah Alex is kinda suck at using guns in general, but he have some knowledge to not flag someone and how to flick the gun safety off because of how he plays the game a lot and maybe some YouTube tutorial, Aiming and recoil control, especially with an assault rifle is not viable to use consistently for him, he only uses the AK 102 because that is the only protection he has at the start of the story. Some neart he future of the story, he will have some training from someone and not stuck using only a shotgun and pistol .

Something like that but don't want to spoil some stuff, but I can guarantee that he had the same body and face before the reincarnation... Something unusual is gonna be happening to him soon

I see what the op talking about, it's about pacing, if you have a love interest in your novel you have to make it believable, don't rush it, it's okay with the smut but that kind of pacing is such a turn-off, especially in this platform, and the op giving you 1.5 star it's not that bad, try posting this on fanfiction net, they really gonna chew you out. But keep writing author, don't give up

Hahaha, sorry, kinda busy with collage rn, don't have time tow write

When you look them in the wrong way. Enderman:

Kinda want to make a harem but I'm suck at making it a "good harem" fanfic, but yeah it's official the lover for mc is just one.... possessive one

Hahaha thanks to the review, I'm trying to make a new idea for fanfic and not just overuse templates like from anime and stuff, if you like my story, do you have any suggestion or something that can help me improve my writing ?