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So.. by having them die.. you kinda fail to prove your point to stain... again. You need to survive and change. it defeats the point of doing these games if everyone fails and no one live to tell the tell of the "jigsaw games"
I don't get why you chose to kill this hero? There are sooo many actually corrupt heroes. and you chose one that didn't really prove you point to (stain).. you executed a innocent man racked by the guilt of a failure he didn't see coming. Nice writing regardless of my opinion.
Bro's the definition of running down mid to "defeat" the enemy carry.
..I think there is some ai involved here. I've seen the same phrase repeated multiple times.. after all, this is only the beginning
...They've know eachother for like what.. a day?
Problem is you can't fix those tendency, you hid them. The fact that we see him in this manner will always paint his future interactions."Is he being genuine when talks this character?", "What is his reason to do this?", "Why does he care about this now?"
He hasn't shown any signs of remorse that usually comes with redemption. Just a cold sociopathic mentality l.
Question, is this smut with plot, or just smut?
lesser demonic breach? Maybe some trigon silliness? Braniac comes planet hunting? darkest night latern stuff? Heck literally apokolps (Darkseid)
short-round is funny. I hope he doesn't die T.T