BlueMoon_IceCat
I love to eat noodles, that's it
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BlueMoon_IceCat5dPublicado por[Review from a reader at Chapter 10] There are a few things that i don't really like in the story so far. 1. The Chapter 1 of this story is uncomfortably similar to the first chapter of RSSG. The structure and the sequence. 2. So far (Chapter 10), the characters are 2D. I mean they sound so bland 3. The flow of the story is like a paper filled with holes. The thought process is always broken and made the story painfully bland to me. So far, that's the things i noticed in the story. Despite all of this, i will continue reading this hoping that the author will improve. I'll make another review once i reach Chapter 50. Sorry for this review, Author 😞
- BlueMoon_IceCat1yrrespondió a Devontae_Stephens
Because I'm also a Uke
[You obtain the Upgrade, Womb] - BlueMoon_IceCat2yrComentado porCh 8 Chapter 8 - Incest (2/2)
- BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a Aurelius04
Heaven ;)
BlueMoon_IceCat or Eliseo Bundalian is a lazy young man that loves staying up late but still continue living. He was born on May 5, 2007 and is currently 14 years old. Eliseo loves eating noodles but sadly, his parents forbid him lest he got UTI. Eliseo loves doing his school works in the last minute and always complain that he wants to die but in truth, he's just lazy that's why he said those words. Eliseo hates anyone interrupting him when he is reading but he will not say it and will just keep it inside his head. He loves egg in his noodles. Aside from that, he is broke and loves money. If you can, he hopes for you to donate in his Ko fi account. He also hopes you enjoy his craft and stories. The lazy Author loves you UwU. - BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a Male_stormCh 8 Chapter 8 - Incest (2/2)
- BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a MinMinOppa
Who knows? Even the Author himself don't know hahaha. I'll just let the story flow itself
Using a drop of blood as the sacrifice, summon large chunks of crystal made from blood that can be freely controlled and manipulated. Every time the Blood Crystal deals damage to the enemy, they will be slowed down and have their health absorbed.] - BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a Elmarc_YarkaCh 8 Chapter 8 - Incest (2/2)
- BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a MystiGlacier06
I am hahaha
Chapter 8 - Incest (2/2) - BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a Kookorachas
Well, I still got a lot of World Quest to do because I'm lazy to do them
After the long wait, I finally have an update (a short one). Sorry for not updating for months. Got addicted to Genshin Impact. But hey, at least I'm already at AR 50. Anyways, i didn't listen to the poll cause I'm a bad bitch and chose the Blood Crystal Quirk. I'm promise you this quirk have an unlimited potential. Anyways, I'm out. Enjoy (or not) the chapter. Muah <3 - BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a BowsmenCh 7 Chapter 7 - Incest (1/2)
- BlueMoon_IceCat2yrComentado porCh 57 Jinchuriki and Epilogue
- BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a king_Gurra10Ch 5 Chapter 5: Dinner With 3 Jounin [EDITED]
- BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a TanoshimiSubete
Thank you. Muah <3
In a warm and cozy room, a delicate young man can be seen sitting in front of his computer. Displayed in the screen is a famous anime, Naruto. - BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a Elmarc_Yarka
Call FBI, hurry! Hahaha
Note: He was amazed by your appearance and have thoughts of courting you.] - BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a ReNo
It really is gay hahaha
Note: He was amazed by your appearance and have thoughts of courting you.] - BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a ReNo
Go ahead, my dear. I'll be the witness Muah 3
(A/N: Ayuna is currently under 13 and Renma knows that.... I'm calling the FBI. Bye!) - BlueMoon_IceCat2yrrespondió a ReyExanimeCh 5 Chapter 5: Dinner With 3 Jounin [EDITED]