Sildgutt

soooo, a death sentence? humans usually cant live more than 3 days without water?

didnt read it all, however what i read was ok in the start. but then the next 20 chapters was copyed from the first two chapters. in addition, the author has no control over firsts and seconds and thirds. It could Just as well be called "the filler book with a forgetful first achivement system".

You could possibly move faster if you spun 180 degrees each step. So one step forward and one step backward. However backward running is less efficient. So probably not. For those that claim that parallell running is faster, why dont we see it in competitions? Running and jumping. However fighting might be better since it allows you to present the side in front instead of the chest. But that is a small application. And you rarely want to accelerate as fast as possible for long in a fight, as it makes you predictable.

this is it, if stats is an important part, pay attention. 10000points, is how many monsters? earlier each early e-grade monster was 200 points each. the first Day before resting he killed 29 +1 intermediate, some trees, a bunch of small groups of monsters and helped a group with a large number of monsters. after two more days, he has earned points for approx 50 early grade e mobs (200points×50 ). that is less then the first hunting! im gone, tell me if you get your numbers to match more than what you want him to have. i Will Come back.

last chapter he used an hour to kill 14 wolves concealed from a tree with a bow! and he ran out of arrows. bad writing?

so he brings a Max of 360 arrows with a storage item( one shot every 10 sec for an hour)? bad planning. Also over 100 arrows to kill 30 wolves in an hour, but 10 of them in the first volley, unlikely unless specific tactics are used. describe better the combat or if you want to be sloppy, write later, not an hour later. you have done this before with the kobolds, using 10 min in close combat. 10 min in close combat with or without weapons is a loooong time. especially for agile fighters with more offencive then defencive power.

first time?! All he has been doing is training! For 80% of the novel. can you please write something more than training logs? more dialoge more worldbuilding. less "train, eat, sleep & repeat"

I mean, something that is 1/4 bigger(based on your measures) than the original is not much bigger. the "hedgehog" is much bigger then the original. if size was a factor in power(as it seems it sometimes is for beasts). a polar bear 1/4 stronger + magic should not be an opponent that is unsurvivable for the current MC.

as in a title? be more specific next time. if this is how it goes i am gone. I usually dont Read chapter titles as a message from writer to reader. good luck with your novel!

not much bigger then a real ice bear, unless it is measured standing on all four legs and not on two legs.