Annabeth_Dudley

While this story focuses more on small details and has short chapters, it is still one of my favorite on this app. The characters are very well written and the plot is very well thought out Definately would recconmend

Dear author You should never feel pressured to post a new chapter or apologize for being late especially with something that serious. Your story is amazing hope you get better or are allready there!

Yeah and differentiate by making Parahgraphs. Its not a bad story but there are no “” marking the end of a phrase or the beginning. It will make it seem like it isnt as rushed.