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The first time she appeared, his first thought was to kill her for possibly being a threat to the Drummonds. It was clearly over the top on his part (overprotective), so he regretted thinking about killing her without even knowing her, and tried to give her a chance... well, he's not in love with her, but he also wants to be "good" for her.
but a little arrogance isn't so bad either, right? he's trying
soon I think
I don't control the cost of chapters, it's based on the word count of each chapter. So if you pay twice as many coins for a chapter, that means it's twice as long, so how can it be unfair?
I did a proportional time inversion to give mystery and a POV of Arthur's enemies in Silas' first appearance, but then I went back in time using the phrase "half an hour ago" and explained how it got to that point.
You're right, I exaggerated. But I was probably getting a lot of that same criticism back then, readers want characters to be perfect when their flaws are part of the personality. sorry for my rant
ops, my bad
arrogance, affects even the best haha