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Mr_HonestReview3 months agoComentado porIf the MC keeps acting like a pushover, it's time to drop this.
- Mr_HonestReview4 months agoComentado por
A wimp?
- Mr_HonestReview5 months agoComentado por
I'll marinate, I'll be back so please don't drop this again.
- Mr_HonestReview5 months agoComentado por
the reasoning is very flawed. If he received a crippling injury but survived, what then?Live a life with disability? Instead of taking advantage of a perfect heal, he chose some bullsheyt excuse.
- Mr_HonestReview5 months agoComentado por
no shiyt bruv, battling a same war everyday for a year? A lunatic indeed
- Mr_HonestReview5 months agoComentado por
It's ridiculous... Too much ass kissing.
- Mr_HonestReview6 months agoComentado por
Inconsistencies, it wasn't just the mist village— every village attacked uzu
- Mr_HonestReview6 months agorespondió a Mr_HonestReview
Secondly, regarding the power scaling between the Naruto verse and 40K, you’re nerfing Naruto too much. I can accept that Custodes could dominate the Naruto verse, but standard Ultramarines—except at Calgar level—shouldn’t. Custodes and Calgar would still be completely outclassed by god-tier characters. Ps. I don't want to argue about the logic of it. Just don't make it too biased.
- Mr_HonestReview6 months agoPublicado por
Overall it's good but I'd like to point out the inconsistencies. Firstly, if the MC can remember Tony, it doesn’t make sense for him not to remember Thor. Ultramarines don’t undergo memory wipes; their memories simply fade over time because they were recruited before puberty. But the MC is a transmigrator—he lived a full life before becoming an Ultramarine. When the system activated, he even experienced a flashback of his past, which means those memories should naturally resurface, especially since he already remembered Tony. Add to that the Emperor’s blessing, and it’s only logical that the MC would try to recover as much of his past as possible. Ultramarines don’t half-ass their mission.
- Mr_HonestReview7 months agoPublicado por
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