The_Hand

even Joker doesn't want to mess with IRS

whoa, the racism in this story is sooo bad. Not only that, the writer can't make up their mind on the gender of the spiderman.

What's the end goal here? What's the story's ending target here?

this one

The story flow of this fanfic is okay. It is not too dramatic or too simple. The grammar is also fine. However, I think this fanfic is too personal. It feels like it was written mostly for the writer’s own wishes. Which is not the kind of story I like to read.

The translation is very inconsistent and low quality, borderline unreadable. For example one of the sentences said that the meat is rotten, but the next sentence said that the meat is steaming hot.

The story is bland and too straightforward, which makes it feel unnatural, like it was generated by an AI. It has the potential to be great, but the lack of plot development, even for a light-hearted, slice-of-life story, makes reading it feel like a chore.

unfortunately no 😅