I really liked this story, with likable characters and an interesting development. There are some minimal grammatical errors, but they are easily ignored and are not very relevant.

I love the new side of the Pokemon Universe the story takes, and the much more serious and realistic views of what would a world where Pokemon existed be like. Something unique about this story that I also enjoy is the 'sistem' of power of the Pokemon that resemble a lot to those in chinese fanfictions. It brings a diferent flavor to the story and takes away the 'limit' in the streght that one Pokemon can have that I feel like is present in the regular Pokemon stories. The story is not very consistent in updates and there's a lot of gramatical erros, but overal is an incredible piece of literature that I recomend.

I really like the main character and the whole idea the story is portraying. It shows great promise and I'm excited to read the next chapters. Only problem is the slow updates.